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Serenity by ~winpain4:iconwinpain4:

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Serenity

Serenity is you and me
all wrapped up
uncaring
never bearing
the weight of this world
essence of time
spent with a dime
outside we're empty
a moment, you see
hidden behind
the walls of our minds
and the doors of our eyes
block out the lies
and will set us free
Serenity is you and me
©2004-2009 ~winpain4
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Picture of me and my little angel. I can't believe I have a daughter.

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~astercrow Oct 7, 2004, 8:56:49 PM
I can't believe you wrote this poem in 2 minutes and it still made me emotional enough that I couldn't talk. I really love this :)
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~astercrow Oct 14, 2004, 1:14:01 AM
you know, i really get stuck on the part...

hidden behind
the walls of our minds
and the doors of our eyes
block out the lies

...because you take it from a physical feeling, convert it to something emotional, then bounce back and do it again without losing the relations that they have with each other. i just interpret it on multiple levels, and that's what really makes it great to me.

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~katerz1313 Oct 16, 2004, 8:04:33 PM
I love this.. seriously.. this is a terrific picture it almost made me cry becuase it was so bueatiful.. definate fave.. its things like this that make me want a child so bad.

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~reference Oct 17, 2004, 8:30:59 PM
I adore that photograph! Pictures do speak a thousand words, but the first word to even come to my mind..is just plain beautiful. <3

I am glad you were blessed with a little angel :).
-Kim

Oh, and thanks for commenting on my site..I hope my art leads me somewhere nice someday!
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~kishi Oct 18, 2004, 10:09:21 PM
Wow, yea. Pictures are worth a thousand words as ~reference said, but those words there sum it up really nicely! I really like this one. Babies = Super :3
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~Moozle Mar 21, 2005, 5:59:13 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that is the cutest little baby i have ever seen :D

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~winpain4 Mar 27, 2005, 7:01:19 PM
thank you sooo much:!::!: =)

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Watching her grow is more amazing than I could ever have imagined.

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~winpain4 Mar 27, 2005, 7:01:59 PM
thank you sooo much:!::!: =)

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